I learned this week that I still need a lot of practice with my timing balloons. Rather, I need more practice using the word balloons to convey a sense of comedic timing. I also realize that the font I chose for Bat may be too close to the font I chose for Patrick. It was intended to be close, but I’m not sure I can even see the difference. Maybe it’s intervention from the Id.
Paddy: What I still don’t understand; to the left a little please; there is no outside access to the attic; a little higher; how are you getting in?
Long ungainly pause
Bat: With gusto!
Paddy: Your timing’s off Mr. Atkins