Some effects just work better in motion than they do in photos. Using the Hollywood trick of the high violin strings playing in the background would have helped too. I’m afraid it looks more like someone trying to peek into a locker room, than it does a drifting in and out of focus. It’s a learning process.
Paddy: Hello? Oh good. You took quite the blow.
Patrick: heeeeyyyy…where’d you get the flowers?…and hair?…and flowers…
Paddy: OK Boy-o, let’s get you home.
Patrick: pretty, pretty hair…
Paddy: Or maybe to hospital. Fuck me! I can’t drive